Reflective cover letter:
In this paper I was trying to explain how the importance of grammar has changed. My main point was that sometimes it is important and sometimes it is not as important. I think that the argument about texting and how it changes how people write for academic purposes or for their jobs is working well in my paper. I think that maybe the generation part was not working so well. I want the readers to understand that writing has changed over the years and somethings are not as important as they used to be.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B9ku8u6rjihJdWxNbkNvSFhSY3FmVHpIQWZ3V2dvQQ
The majority of the paper reads extremely well. The only thing I'd watch out for is using to many questions, especially in the introduction. You did a great job in completing all the elements in the section "what am looking for".
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