With this paper I tried to show the process of how I write. My main claim was that I consider myself a one draft writer and that I don't consider myself a good writer. To support my claim I wrote through the process that I go through when I write papers or articles. I think the good things about my paper were the details that I showed how I go about writing a paper. The parts of my paper that I am not too sure about are the intro and the conclusion because I wasn't positive how to go about them.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B9ku8u6rjihJYTRjNTBhNTMtNmY1Zi00N2U2LWFmZDYtMDU0ODE0NWNjZmE3
Emily's main point of this paper was explaining what kind of writer she was and how she wrote. Her supporting reasons were her observations of what she does when she writes and her experience with what helps her in writing a paper.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described your writing process so thoroughly. I like how you are so honest about what you do and your opinions about yourself. I think your paper meets the requirements pretty well, just make sure to go back and try to make it so others can more easily apply it to themselves. I do think this paper was a little bland and boring, maybe try adding a little more meat to it. I think your conclusion is awesome, but maybe try not to make your introduction so general and ordinary, make it unique and stand out.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cIPT-hg8zhjnOnmpJHJNSg5dWzTXhB6ldXrwQYJ2jUI/edit